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Title

Barley Legal Teens

Author

Bronwen

Story Code(s)

F/M, Teen

Length

2,400 words

Rating

Excellent

Summary

Laura fondly remembers the summer she was eighteen, Joe, and a field of barley.

Commentary

The story is well paced. It is both arousing and romantic. I like the way the author transitions from the present to the past, and then back again.

ASSM Link(s)

Part 1 (of 1)