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Title |
A Matter of Need |
Author |
Watcher |
Story Code(s) |
M/F |
Length |
14,700 words |
Rating |
Good |
Summary |
Barry grieves over the death of his wife for two years. It is Crystal, a stripper, who finally captures his heart and ends his mourning period. |
Commentary |
I like the way this story begins. I do not like the way it
ends. I am disappointed that Jeanine, a friend of Barry,
only made a brief appearance in the story. When she was
first introduced I thought she was there to do more than
just help set the mood. Alas, she was not. This is a well written story, but I cannot believe that it is love that motivated Barry to fall for Crystal. It was lust. Maybe the author did not mean for it to be love. Even if that is the case, I think there was too much of this story spent in the strip bar. I did not care for the way the author resolved Barry's dilemma. I would much rather have seen him jumping in the sack with his friend Jeanine, or even his other friend, Ted. |
ASSM Link(s) |
Part 1 (of 3) Part 2 (of 3) Part 3 (of 3) |