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Title |
Chosen |
Author |
Crimson Dragon |
Story Code(s) |
F/F, Exhib |
Length |
7,800 words |
Rating |
Good |
Summary |
Bree is ready to go to bed with Dave, but ends up in bed with Natasha. |
Commentary |
This is a well written story. There are no misspelled
words or careless grammatical errors. It has a plot. The
characters seem realistic. I am disappointed with the ending; it is anti-climactic. The author introduces the reader to Chet and Dave, but does not include them in the denouement. Natasha plays a pivotal role in the story, but the most the reader is told about her is what she looks like. I do not think this is a bad story, but I feel a little let down. |
ASSM Link(s) |
Part 1 (of 1) |