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Title |
Lover's Desire |
Author |
J. R. Parz |
Story Code(s) |
TG, Transform, F/F, Cons, F/F/F, MC |
Length |
5,900 words |
Rating |
Not Good |
Summary |
Jess buys a magic potion that transforms him into a woman. |
Commentary |
This story was too straight forward. There was no real
tension or build up, leading to the sex. The sex itself was a
jumble of bodies with no real emotions. The characters
were rather thin. There was not much to them. What I like to see in a transgender story is a man or woman getting transformed into a member of the opposite sex and then see how the transformation affects their sexual orientation. The main character in this story seemed to have no problem adjusting. He went from being a heterosexual man to a homosexual woman. His tastes did not change. I found this boring. |
ASSM Link(s) |
Part 1 (of 1) |