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Title |
The Housesitter |
Author |
Steve |
Story Code(s) |
M/F, Teen |
Length |
7,800 words |
Rating |
Very Good |
Summary |
Brian's mother hires a 19-year-old woman to look after a 17-year-old boy. |
Commentary |
I thought the author did a good job with describing things
from Brian's point of view. There is a plot. He builds up to
the sex and does not have too much of it. If I wanted to find fault with this story I would say that the dialogue left something to be desired. It lacked emotions. The characters did not seem to be feeling anything, emotionally, when they spoke. It was like actors who read their lines without communicating any feeling. I should not complain about the dialogue, it's stilted nature did make me laugh. |
ASSM Link(s) |
Part 1 (of 3) Part 2 (of 3) Part 3 (of 3) |