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Title |
Marie's Gift |
Author |
fcp |
Story Code(s) |
M/F |
Length |
3,800 words |
Rating |
Good |
Summary |
James' war wounds are healed and Donna's eyes are opened to new options in their sex life after an interesting night of playing bridge with their neighbors. |
Commentary |
This was a nicely paced story. The author did a good job
of not filling in too many of the details. It was soft and
subtle. It did not come out and grab me, but rather drew
me in by making me think. The author did a good job with the plot and characters. Most of the descriptions helped to bring the story to life, however the card game and sex scene left something to be desired. The former because it was so technical. I am not familiar with the game of bridge. The latter because it lacked feeling. It was not totally devoid of emotion, but James tears were the only ones I felt. |
ASSM |
Marie's Gift |