Revisions

I've just posted revised versions of all the parts of the "Losing My Shirt" series, which I am now calling Home for the Summer to keep it consistent with the version on storiesonline.net.

The revisions are very minor - typos, spelling, missing words, grammar, and similar errors. Other than that, I only changed a couple of sentences here and there. If you've already read the story, there's no reason to read it again (unless you want to!). If you are keeping a copy for your archives, this version should be a bit cleaner than the last. Many thanks to bohica and DocWilco for their editorial assistance.

For background on each chapter, click the "Losing My Shirt" or "Home for the Summer" label below.

Home for the Summer
Chapter 1: Losing My Shirt (ffM, fM, ffM, fM, bd, reluc, pett, oral, inc)
Chapter 2: Double Down (Mff, oral, inc)
Chapter 3: Booty Call (Mf, oral, rim, anal)
Chapter 4: Because of a Little Kink (Msolo, ff, fsolo, fsolo, exhib, inc(?))
Chapter 5: Getting Wet (Mf, fsolo, fM, oral, inc)
Chapter 6: A Goodbye Present (Mf, Mff, pett, oral, rim, anal)
Chapter 7: Firsts and Lasts (Mf, Mff, oral, rim, pett, bd, 1st, inc)

(text versions are:
ftp://ftp.asstr.org/pub/Authors/virgil_black/txt/losing_my_shirt.txt
ftp://ftp.asstr.org/pub/Authors/virgil_black/txt/double_down.txt
ftp://ftp.asstr.org/pub/Authors/virgil_black/txt/booty_call.txt
ftp://ftp.asstr.org/pub/Authors/virgil_black/txt/because_of_a_little_kink.txt
ftp://ftp.asstr.org/pub/Authors/virgil_black/txt/getting_wet.txt
ftp://ftp.asstr.org/pub/Authors/virgil_black/txt/a_goodbye_present.txt
ftp://ftp.asstr.org/pub/Authors/virgil_black/txt/firsts_and_lasts.txt)