SUMMARY: Susan defiantly accepts her lesbian friend's challenge: that she can make Susan come, even though Susan is heterosexual.

COMMENTARY: What do I like about this story? The author focuses first and foremost on the emotions that Susan and Leslie, her lesbian friend, are experiencing. [Leslie? Lesbian? Hmmm?] The author does devote some time to describing exactly what they are doing, but in my opinion this was not *the* focus of the story. However, getting back to Susan's emotional state as described by the author, it isn't just the fact that the author devotes a significant portion of the story to *showing* the reader how and what she is experiencing emotionally. It is also the fact that it takes some time before Susan accepts that it is okay to enjoy having sex with Leslie. In other words, Susan is faced with a dilemma. I like dilemmas. Dilemmas are good for erotic stories, provided that they are convincingly portrayed. I, personally, am convinced that Susan experiences a real dilemma in this story. Consequently, I am very impressed by this author's work, along with being very aroused.

Oh, and by the by, I haven't even mentioned the exhibitionist and voyeuristic elements in this story, but they are there and they also add flavor to the story.

What don't I like about this story? The ending is a bit predictable. There are some grammatical errors.

Do I recommend this story? Yes, I strongly recommend that you read it, unless of course you do not care for stories that involve lesbian sex.

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