SUMMARY: Jim replies to a classified ad placed by Samantha, who is looking for a "firm but gentle male to dominate" her.

COMMENTARY: This story builds up quite nicely. I like both the characters they seem realistic enough. I enjoyed the sex play. The characters came across as active participants in the action and not just actors playing their respective parts.

On the down side it is worth noting that this is a *long* first chapter. The author probably should have broken it down into three or four shorter chapters.

One last thing, I have to admit that while I enjoyed this story I may be a biased towards it. I say this primarily because I tend to enjoy tales of bondage and discipline that have a romantic twist to them. This story certainly falls into that category.

I will probably be reading and reviewing chapter two at some time in the near future.

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Excellent

LINK(S):

• ASSM Archive
• Part 1 of 2
• Part 2 of 2