SUMMARY: Jenn accepts an offer from a married couple, Fred and Jeannie. An offer to give her a massage, that is, with no strings attached. But what if she wants more than just a massage?

COMMENTARY: What I like about this story is how the author builds it up. She does a great job making it arousing, long before the sex begins. The focus of the story seems to be Jenn's experience.

I had a hard time following some of the descriptions of the menage-a-trois. The mental images that I conjured were not always consistent with normal humans having sex. Maybe Jenn, Jeannie, and Fred are contortionists? Maybe my brain just wasn't functioning correctly when I read this story? Either way, it did not detract form my ability to enjoy the story, but taken from an objective point of view, it is a flaw.

If you are looking for a story with a deep plot, then you might want to skip this one. The author does a beautiful job with narration, but the overwhelming focus is on Jenn's emotional state and not the progression of a series of events. That sounds overly clinical to me, so let me end this review by saying that I really did enjoy this story.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 9.0 (out of 10)

• Arousal: 5/5
• Editing: 4/5
• Plot and Characters: 4/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Excellent

LINK(S):

• Erotic Love Stories by JennTill