SUMMARY: Nathan and Ariel, a happily married couple move back to her hometown. Sylvia, Ariel's sister, soon becomes a fixture in their lives. Is it because Sylvia enjoys spending time with her sister or is it because she enjoys spending time with her brother-in-law? Read the story and find out.

COMMENTARY: I liked this story a lot. There are a few plot twists that made it interesting and less predictable. I enjoyed the narration. Nathan has two qualities that I liked. One, he has a sense of humor. Two, his reactions to the curves that are thrown his way seem spontaneous and unrehearsed. There is one more thing about this story that impressed me. The author has seen fit to include little details here and there. These details breathe life into the characters and the world they live in. This technique, that the author employs quite skillfully, made the plot and characters more interesting to me. It also made the story seem more realistic.

Oh yeah, I almost forgot. There is also some pretty hot sex in this story; which probably has something to do with why I liked the story so much. In all honesty, though, if not for the other things I mentioned earlier in this review, I don't think that the hot sex would have seemed quite as hot.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 9.0 (out of 10)

• Arousal: 4/5
• Editing: 5/5
• Plot and Characters: 5/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Excellent

LINK(S):

• Revealing Secrets - Part 1 of 1