SUMMARY: A young man and his older sister, Regina, kiss and makeup. This occurs after they have fought over whether he should get to sleep in the bed with her or have to sleep on the floor.

COMMENTARY: The thing I like the most about this story are the details. The author does a very nice job setting it up. The sex is nicely handled. Both characters seem realistic. Their relationship comes across as true-to-life. If I had a complaint, it would be that the beginning sets up this beautiful background, which is then hardly used at all in the story. It gives the story flavor, but it also raised my expectations.

There are a few places where it seems that words are missing. Considering how short this story is, that seemed excessive.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 8.0 (out of 10)

• Arousal: 4/5
• Editing: 4/5
• Plot and Characters: 4/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Very Good

LINK(S):

• The Deep South - Part 1 (of 1)