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Friday Night at Friday's
G. M. Torrey
11,400 words
Male
Twosome (Female, Male)
Twosome (2 Females)
Heterosexual (Female, Male)
Homosexual (Female)
Friends
Voyeurism
Home
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SUMMARY: Jason is determined to have sex with his wife's friend, Daneta. Fearing that he may be about to lose his only chance at scoring with Daneta, Jason plans to rape and murder her. Things don't turn out quite as Jason planned.

COMMENTARY: This story is a bit weird. The plot twists were just a bit too dramatic for me to consider them believable. I had a hard time understanding what exactly led Jason to the point that he was prepared to rape and murder Daneta. I also found the turn events which leads to the outcome of the story to be as incredulous as Jason's scheme.

This isn't a bad story, but it is just a bit too much for me to accept. I might have found the story a bit more engaging if the focus had been on the motivations of the various characters, rather than the course of events.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 5.5 (out of 10)

• Arousal: 2/5
• Editing: 4/5
• Plot and Characters: 3/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Good

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• Friday Night at Friday's - Part 1 (of 1)