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Title |
Every Girl Has Her Price |
Author |
Maria Gonzales |
Length |
9,700 words |
Main Character |
Female |
Combination(s) |
Solo (Female) Twosome (1 Female, 1 Male) Twosome (2 Females) |
Orientation(s) |
Heterosexual (Female, Male)
Homosexual (Female) |
Relationship(s) |
Strangers |
Kink(s) |
Exhibitionism |
Setting(s) |
Bar Restaurant |
Genre(s) |
-- |
Caution(s) |
-- |
Summary |
Juana works at a fast food restaurant. Kyle, a customer, offers her money to expose herself to her coworkers. Taking Kyle up on his first offer only leads to additional offers from Kyle, which for the most part involve exposing herself further. |
Commentary |
This is a very arousing story. The fact that Juana
was doing things that she normally would not do made this story
quite arousing. The fact that I could feel the tension in her
voice and imagine what was going through her head as she
considered each offer also made this story rather arousing. This is a well written story, but I had a couple problems with it. It is well paced and flows well enough. The author does a nice job keeping the story rolling. She does not allow it to slow or bog down. I'm not too sure how realistic the characters are, but the fact that Juana does not leap at every offer that Kyle throws her way makes her seem more realistic. Kyle is more of a type; I find him lacking as a main player in the story. One more criticism that I have to make is that the story does not seem to build to any particular point. While Kyle's offers do get to be more and more challenging for Juana, I got the sense that the story could have ended before it did, or could have continued on. What made the end "the end", was that that was where the author decided it would be. Despite what I perceive as a couple short comings, I enjoyed this story. It is very arousing. I think most of you should also enjoy it. I have given it a Very Good. |
Arousal |
4 out of 5 |
Editing |
5 out of 5 |
Plot and |
3 out of 5 |
Objective |
8.0 out of 10 |
Subjective |
Very Good |
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