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Title |
The Shaver |
Author |
Al Steiner |
Story Code(s) |
F/F |
Length |
7,100 words |
Arousal |
4 out of 5 |
Story |
4 out of 5 |
Objective Analysis |
8 out of 10 |
Subjective Analysis |
Excellent |
Summary |
Jen gets her pussy shaved by Charlie, her sister-in-law. |
Commentary |
This is a very arousing story. It was the
combination of Jen's horniness, which is
evident before her sister-in-law enters the
story, and her trepidation, which becomes
a factor once Charlie offers to shave her
cunt, that made this story very arousing for
me. I think it also helped that the author
took the time to set the story up. The story is well written. Both characters seem realistic enough. They aren't extremely deep, but the author does do a good job of showing the internal turmoil that Jen experiences when she finds herself aroused by Charlie's handiwork. The plot follows a logical course and flows smoothly. Having said all this, I should also mention that this is a stroke story. Jen's life does not seem to revolve around sex, but the story certainly does. I really enjoyed this story. It is well put together and rather arousing. It definitely makes my A-list. |
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