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Title |
Raga |
Author |
Taria |
Story Code(s) |
M/F |
Length |
5,500 words |
Arousal |
4 out of 5 |
Story |
5 out of 5 |
Objective Analysis |
9 out of 10 |
Subjective Analysis |
Very Good |
Summary |
A man and a woman have sex. A prince and a servant girl make love. |
Commentary |
This is a well composed story. It consists of
a sexual fantasy that has been framed with
snippets from a more realistic sex scene. I
think this is an excellent trick to use and
that the author uses it quite effectively. The sex in the fantasy story is very arousing. In particular I enjoyed the servant girl's transformation from innocent to passionate. The author uses some Indian terms in this story. I think that they made my imagination work a little harder and, considering their placement, made the story a little more arousing. I enjoyed this story, and it is well written, but I am not wild about it. It is for that reason that I am placing it on my B-list, rather than my A-list. This is not a knock against the author's writing abilities. You may enjoy the story even more than I did, so please do not let my subjective opinion carry too much weight. Consider what I have said and the objective scores that I gave this story. |
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