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Title |
Mowing the Lawn |
Author |
OddManOut |
Story Code(s) |
M/f, Teen |
Length |
5,700 words |
Arousal |
4 out of 5 |
Story |
4 out of 5 |
Objective Analysis |
8 out of 10 |
Subjective Analysis |
Very Good |
Summary |
Brad, 36, hates mowing the lawn, but then he meets his 17-year-old neighbor Katie, while returning her father's lawnmower. |
Commentary |
I found this story to be very arousing. The
author takes his time. The story begins
with the rather mundane activity of
mowing the lawn but quickly heats up.
There is some tension in the sexual
encounter that Katie and Brad share. It
seemed realistic and served to increase my
arousal. This is a stroke story. The plot is well placed, but after a point revolves around nothing other than sex. The characters seem life-like enough, though it would have been nice if there had been another side to Katie. This is a stroke story though, maybe I'm asking too much. On the whole I enjoyed this story. It is rather vanilla, but it is well written and arousing enough to make my B-list. That's why I gave it a Very Good, under Subjective Analysis. |
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