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Title

 Sheila the Great

Author

 Schulzie

Story Code(s)

 m/ffff, Teen, Exhib

Length

 1,700 words

Arousal

 4 out of 5

Story

 5 out of 5

Objective Analysis

 9 out of 10

Subjective Analysis

 Excellent

Summary

 A man reflecting on his teen years remembers the summer that Sheila, another teenager, taught him a game called Trust Me?

Commentary

 I found this story to be very arousing. If it had been a little longer I might have even said it was extremely arousing.

I cannot find any faults with the story. I like the characters, but then the author does not spend too much time describing them. He did give enough details to get my imagination rolling in the right direction. They did seem realistic. There is not a whole lot to the plot, but what there is seems to flow together quite nicely.

I really, really liked this story. The only problem I have with it, is that it is as short as it is. This is another way of saying that I wish that it had been longer, not that there was anything missing. Even though I wish it were longer, I still enjoyed it enough to consider it to be Excellent.

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