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Title |
For the Love of My Brother |
Author |
Crystal D |
Story Code(s) |
F/M, Inc |
Length |
5,400 words |
Rating |
Very Good |
Arousal Factor |
High |
Story Factor |
Average |
Summary |
A young woman, age 22, describes her seduction of her half-brother, age 38. |
Commentary |
This story is very arousing. The author lets
the tension build before her two characters
jump in the sack. I like that. I prefer to see more dialogue than there is in this story. There is more to this story than just descriptions of sex, but sex is definitely the focus of the story. |
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