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Title

The Waterfall

Author

Susan

Story Code(s)

F/F/M

Length

2,600 words

Rating

Good

Arousal Factor

Average

Story Factor

Average

Summary

Sue and Martin have an encounter with a mysterious woman.

Commentary

This is your basic, run-of-the-mill, menage-a-trois, under-a-waterfall story. I like the narrator's reluctance. She is not forced to do anything she does not want to, but the fact that she does not immediately accept all sexual contact is nice to see. It gives her some depth.

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