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Title |
I Could Eat You Up |
Author |
J. Friedman |
Story Code(s) |
F/M, Inc, Teen |
Length |
4,500 words |
Rating |
Excellent |
Arousal Factor |
High |
Story Factor |
High |
Summary |
Lila has nothing to look forward to at Thanksgiving, except seeing her cousin Steve. |
Commentary |
This is a fun story. The author takes the time to set the stage. It
takes some time before the sex begins. One thing that I like about this story is the restraint the author shows. Possibly it is not that the author is restraining herself, but that she wants to do more than describe a sexual encounter. Either way, I like that the author keeps the story simple, including the sex. |
ASSM Link(s) |
Part 1 (of 1) |