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Title |
The Adventures of Ultra Woman and Mega Girl |
Author |
Ann Douglas |
Story Code(s) |
F/F |
Length |
10,300 words |
Rating |
Good |
Summary |
Jacqueline and Joanne take their relationship to a new level, during a comic book convention. |
Commentary |
I thought this story was a superhero story; it is not. The author
does use a few names from the comic book industry. One thing that bothers me about this story is that there is too much going on behind the scenes. Jackie and Jo just sort of come together. There is not much interaction between them, leading up to the point where the sex begins. What interaction there is does not seem to point towards sexual tension or desire. |
ASSM Link(s) |
Part 1 (of 7) Part 2 (of 7) Part 3 (of 7) Part 4 (of 7) Part 5 (of 7) Part 6 (of 7) Part 7 (of 7) |