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Title |
Suze's Wake Up Call |
Author |
Sam Hammer |
Story Code(s) |
F/M, Teen, Inc |
Length |
12,800 words |
Rating |
N/A |
Summary |
Suze is horny and desperate, then she remembers she has a brother. |
Commentary |
This might be a good story, but I cannot honestly say, since I did not read the whole thing. From what I did read I can see that it needs to be edited. There are a large number of grammatical errors. |
ASSM Link(s) |
Part 1 (of 1) |