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Title |
When Summer Comes |
Author |
Hawk Richards |
Story Code(s) |
M/F, Voy, Light Bondage |
Length |
2,200 words |
Rating |
Excellent |
Summary |
Andrew gets a special "thank you" from Ms. Stratton whom he has been doing yard work for. |
Commentary |
This is a stroke story, but what a stroke story! It is just the
right length. The story is very well paced. The sex does not begin with the first paragraph. The author leads up to it quite nicely. The author also does a wonderful job of keeping the story in motion. It does not slow down and devolve into a blow by blow description of sex. |
ASSM Link(s) |
Part 1 (of 1) |