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Title |
The 20th Hole |
Author |
Motion Man |
Story Code(s) |
M/F |
Length |
6,000 words |
Rating |
Good |
Summary |
Steve puts forth the effort to help Andrea, his neighbor, and gets rewarded handsomely. |
Commentary |
There is some preamble, but the story degenerates into a description of sex relatively quickly. I found the story arousing, but the plot goes out the window once the sex begins. |
ASSM Link(s) |
Part 1 (of 2) Part 2 (of 2) |