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Title |
Ornery |
Author |
Lost Girl |
Story Code(s) |
F/M/M, Light B&D |
Length |
4,000 words |
Rating |
Excellent |
Summary |
Meg entertains Tommy, her lover, and Brian, a friend of his, after returning from a visit with her parents. |
Commentary |
There is much more to this story than just sex. There is a beautifully written paragraph about a quarter of the way into the story in which Meg reflects on how she feels about her family. The thoughts are not happy ones, but I love the imagery. The characters all seem very real. |
ASSM Link(s) |
Part 1 (of 1) |