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Title |
The Fan Man |
Author |
Sundance |
Story Code(s) |
Voy, F-solo, F/M, Teen |
Length |
7,000 words |
Rating |
Very Good |
Summary |
Craig agrees to install a fan for his neighbor Cynthia. Cynthia's daughter, Karen, comes home early and gives Craig a nice surprise. |
Commentary |
This is an arousing story, but it is a bit lacking. There is a bit too much sex and too little character development, in the middle of the story, to suit my tastes. I much preferred the first and last thirds of the story, in which there was a better mixture of plot, characterization, and sex. |
ASSM Link(s) |
Part 1 (of 1) |