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The Fan Man

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Summary

Craig agrees to install a fan for his neighbor Cynthia. Cynthia's daughter, Karen, comes home early and gives Craig a nice surprise.

Commentary

This is an arousing story, but it is a bit lacking. There is a bit too much sex and too little character development, in the middle of the story, to suit my tastes.

I much preferred the first and last thirds of the story, in which there was a better mixture of plot, characterization, and sex.

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