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Awakenings

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Summary

Kathryn re-examines her life after being informed that Yolanda, one of her friends, is a lesbian.

Commentary

This is a well written story. The characters are believable. The plot is well conceived and well executed. The sex scenes were not too long, nor too detailed.

One thing that struck me about this story is how it seems to be focused on Kathryn. What I mean to say is that if she is not thinking about something or someone, or interacting with them, they do not seem to exist. It gives the story a surrealistic feel. This is not a bad thing, but I would like to have seen a little more of the world, including things that Kathryn does not see.

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