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Title |
Shower Buddies (Chapters 1 & 2) |
Author |
Stone Wolf |
Story Code(s) |
No Sex |
Length |
4,700 words |
Rating |
Very Good |
Summary |
Julie and Harold meet in the shower. They have budget cuts and a fire to thank for their little encounters. |
Commentary |
This is a good beginning. There is both plot and character development. The author shows us how attraction develops between the two and how both are somewhat apprehensive. He also introduces a villain. This story shows definite potential. It is a shame it was never finished. |
ASSM Link(s) |
Part 1 (of 2) Part 2 (of 2) |