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Summer Rain

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Summary

A man watches a woman masturbate in the rain.

Commentary

This story is more action than feeling. There is no dialogue. It reads like a polished rough draft.

The author tells us a little about the two characters, but not enough for me to feel satisfied.

This might work as part of a longer story, but it does not work standing on its own.

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