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Title |
Teaching the Teacher (Parts 1 & 2) |
Author |
Day Dreamer |
Story Code(s) |
F-solo, M-solo, M/F |
Length |
7,500 words |
Rating |
Good |
Summary |
Joey seduces his teacher, Birdie. |
Commentary |
I had a few problems with this story. Number one, I would
prefer a bit more dialogue, there is very little in this story.
Number two, the sex takes up a large portion of this story.
Number three, there did not seem to be a dilemma. These are only the first two parts of a longer work. I am not too sure where the author can take Joey and Birdie, from here, except to further libidinous heights in bed. This story is very well edited. |
ASSM Link(s) |
Part 1 (of 2) Part 2 (of 2) |