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Title |
Suzette's Passion |
Author |
BitBard |
Story Code(s) |
F/F, F/M |
Length |
12,500 words |
Rating |
Excellent |
Summary |
Suzette, a French maiden of noble birth, is about to be married off to an Italian count, when she is captured and held for ransom by Captain Jack, an English privateer. |
Commentary |
This story was well paced. The author takes his time, and
allows the relationship to grow, rather than forcing it.
There is some reluctance on Suzette's part. I think this
makes the story more realistic and enjoyable. Suzette and Jack seem to connect, first on both a personal level and then on a sexual one. Their mutual attraction is not based on the size of his cock or of her breasts. This story has both plot and characterization. It does not come on too strong or too fast, but slowly and gently pulls the reader in with its descriptions. There is a lot more to this story than just sex. |
ASSM Link(s) |
Part 1 (of 1) |