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Title |
Portfolio Update |
Author |
Jeff Justice |
Story Code(s) |
M/F |
Length |
5,800 words |
Rating |
Good |
Summary |
Noelle wants nude photos of herself and wants her former boss to take them. |
Commentary |
I found this story very arousing. The author does a good
job of building up to the sex. The bad part is that the author did not spend enough time proof reading or editing this story. There are misspelled words, incorrect verb tenses, and run-on sentences. I liked the tone of the story. I could feel the tension in the narrator's voice. |
ASSM Link(s) |
Part 1 (of 2) Part 2 (of 2) |