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Title |
Porch |
Author |
Crimson Dragon |
Story Code(s) |
F/F |
Length |
5,100 words |
Rating |
Excellent |
Summary |
Michelle worries about a kiss. Lara comes round and shows Michelle that everything is all right. |
Commentary |
A good deal of this story is told through dreams and
flashbacks. The author used these techniques quite
effectively. This story has plot. Its characters are not cut-outs, but quite real. The main character is faced with a dilemma. The author does a good job of showing how Michelle copes with her dilemma. |
ASSM |
Porch |