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Title |
Closing Pandora's Box |
Author |
Stephanie |
Story Code(s) |
M/F, TG, Transform, NC |
Length |
6,400 words |
Rating |
Not Good |
Summary |
Alan works for Carl. Carl decides to transform Alan into a beautiful woman. Alan gets the last laugh, after he transforms Carl into a beautiful woman who cannot speak and then transforms himself to look like Carl. |
Commentary |
I am always unsure whether the authors of these sorts of
stories want or expect their audience to be turned on by
the sex. One person raping another is not exciting or
arousing. Under the right conditions I can enjoy a transgender transformation story. Those conditions include a plot and some characterization. Just because an author introduces a device, in this case transformation, into a story does not excuse them from including the standard elements that make for a good story. |
ASSM |
Part One ~ Part Two |