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Title |
Janey's Friend |
Author |
Janey |
Story Code(s) |
F/F |
Length |
4,500 words |
Rating |
Outstanding |
Summary |
This is a sequel to Phone Sex by Taria. Janey and Taria finally meet face to face. |
Commentary |
This is a very soft story. It strokes the reader gently and
does not try to arouse any violent or intense feelings. It is
about friendship and about self-discovery. It is very well
written. I think what I like best about this story is the way in which Janey describes things. She does a good job of letting us see things from her point of view. My favorite sentence is about halfway through the story when Janey sees Taria for the first time: "My heart didn't go pitty pat or anything wimpy like that; it went, 'Ka-BOOM! Ka-BOOM!'" This story was more description then plot. Its a love letter to Taria and it is done beautifully. |
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Janey's Friend |