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Title |
One O'Clock Jump |
Author |
Taria |
Story Code(s) |
M/F |
Length |
4,200 words |
Rating |
9.5 |
Summary |
A man and a woman meet, dance, and fuck; in that order. |
Commentary |
The rhythm of this story is amazing. The way Taria wrote it
you can just feel the beat jumping through it. It probably
would have helped if I had put on some appropriate
music, but even without music Taria's descriptions made
this story shake, jump, and dance. Strictly speaking this story is not about sex or love or even pleasure. It is about a drum beating out a frenetic pace, a horn section hypnotizing all that can hear its siren call, and a throng of hot sweaty people moving with their hearts and praying that the night will never end. That was a poor job of trying to imitate Taria's style in this story, but I could not help myself. I just finished reading it and the music is still inside me. I can hear it now. The drums beating (dum, dum, DUM, dum, dum), the horns wailing, and the people dancing. This story was so much fun to read. I do not claim to be objective usually, and this time I am not even going to attempt to be. I just loved this story. Was it really a story? I think so. It had all the necessary elements, but as long as I let its pace carry me I find it extremely hard to be objective. You never cease to amaze me Taria. |
ASSM |
One O'Clock Jump |