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Title |
The Midnight Snack |
Author |
Hawk Richards |
Story Code(s) |
F-solo |
Length |
1,100 words |
Rating |
6.5 |
Summary |
Taking a hint from one of her neighbors the narrator finally gets to sleep after plunging her own depths. |
Commentary |
This was a good story. I would have liked to have known a little more about the apartment and the world surrounding the narrator. The story works without those kinds of details, but I think they would have made it more complete. This was a simple vignette. There was not much plot or characterization, but the story suffered only minimally because of that. |
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The Midnight Snack |