COMMENTARY: Either Alison doesn't feel very guilty or about cheating on her husband with her brother, or else the author doesn't devote many words to her second thoughts. For the most part the second thoughts she does have are the result of the fact that she has slept with and lusted for her brother. Possibly, breaking that taboo makes her infidelity seem insignificant by comparison.
On the whole this story has most of the elements I like to see in an incest story and a sex story. There is some scene setting and build up before any sex takes place. Ted and Alison do have doubts, regrets, and second thoughts even though they also enjoy themselves. The story does not devolve into mindless sucking and fucking once the sex does begin.
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