COMMENTARY: What if Hamlet's father wasn't killed by
his brother? What if Hamlet was fooling around with
his sister, Ophelia? What if he didn't blame anyone in
particular for his father's death? What if his mother
was sleeping with his father's sister? What if the
story didn't involve several people getting killed?
What if it was set in the present? Well, I think in
that case you might end up with something like this
story.
The main strength of this story is the fact that the
author focuses on the emotional connection at least as
much as he does on the physical relationship that
evolves between the main character and his sister,
Debbie. It was also nice to see the author take a pass
on having the story turn into an all-out orgy. You'll
have to read the story to figure out what I meant by
that last comment.
Overall, I feel that this story was well worth my
time, despite the poor formatting. There are a few
typos. The quality of the writing, plotting,
character/relationship development justifies it being
as long as it is.
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