COMMENTARY: Why did I like this story? Basically I enjoyed it because of the kinks: exhibitionism, male homosexuality, sex toys, anal sex. They all contributed to the pleasure I experienced while reading this story. The way the author handled the characters and the plot also had something to do with the fact that I read the entire story and enjoyed it. Poorly written stories are a dime a dozen and I certainly would not be writing about this story if it wasn't least above average.
Is there anything that I did not like about this story? Well, I would have preferred a little more dialogue. I also would have liked it if there had been a little more to the plot, especially given the story's length.
Not for everyone. Read it if it sounds appealing to you.
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