COMMENTARY:
I guess that what I liked the most about this story is
the way the author paces it. He doesn't rush things. There is time
for flirting and teasing. Sooner or later there is some sex in the
story. I was also impressed because there is more to the ending
than just sex. What I mean is that the plot doesn't disappear once
the sex begins.
What about the main characters? They play their roles well. It
would be unfair to call them single-minded but they don't seem to
have too many qualms about jumping in the sack together.
What didn't I like about this story? The paragraphs are a little
long and there isn't as much dialogue as I like to see in a story,
but that really doesn't matter. This is a well written, arousing
story that I thoroughly enjoyed reading.
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