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COMMENTARY:
Two observations. First observation, this story isn't as
much about what Sue and Tommy end up doing as much as it is about how
they get there; the trip, not the destination. In other words there is
much more flirting, teasing, and foreplay than there is sex. Second
observation, both Sue and Tommy grapple with the morality of their
feelings. The internal conflicts that they individually experience make
them seem real to me. It also makes the story more entertaining that it
otherwise might have been.
If you don't care for mother-son or incest stories then you might want
to skip this one. Otherwise, I strongly recommend you at least try
reading this story.
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