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COMMENTARY:
Teasing. There is a lot of it in this story. The
author does a great job of not making things too simple, in
particular, the main characters. Natalie and Pierre have sex on
the brain throughout the story, but that doesn't mean that they
don't seem realistic. Their desire for sexual pleasure doesn't
blind them. The story is well paced. There is tension throughout
but that just makes the story that much more enjoyable and makes
the outcome that much more special. Did that make any sense?
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