COMMENTARY:
This story is long on buildup, foreplay and teasing, and
light on actual sex. I like that. I am also impressed by the fact that
the three main characters all seem realistic. The two women aren't
carbon copies of one another. All three of the characters have
consciences to go along with their libidos. There is a fair of amount of
dialogue. I like dialogue.
It might be a stretch to suggest that this story is about more than just
sex, but I think that it is. It also has to do with coming of age and
learning to live with the changes that puberty inflicts on our bodies.
What else? The title and my summary might are a bit misleading. The
story focuses on a few days during that summer in the mountains. It is
not a blow by blow description of what Kevin, Kris and Jessie did during
that summer in the mountains.
Other than one or two typos I can't find anything wrong with this story.
I may be a bit biased towards this story because it involves a few
elements/kinks that tickle my fancy (exhibitionism, voyeurism,
consensual incest). I strongly recommend you at least give it a try.
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