SUMMARY: Johnny goes on a boat trip with his neighbor's daughter, Lauren, and her friends.

COMMENTARY: What did I like about this story? The fact that it is well paced and well edited. The author takes his time and doesn't rush things too much.

The fact that the characters seem realistic enough. There is more to them than just libidos. They, Johnny and Lauren, actually think and care about the impact of their actions, to some degree.

The fact that the story isn't too predictable. There are certain things that one assumes are going to happen given the nature of the story. There are also things that the author throws in to make a story more interesting and seem more realistic. He does a nice job both in choosing and presenting these extra elements. They mesh quite well with the evolution of Johnny and Lauren's relationship.

What didn't I like about this story? The fact that the main character is married, and doesn't make much in the way of apologies for his actions. I also didn't care for the one remark he makes about people of Polish blood.

For the most part, I think that this is a male fantasy, although the ladies do seem to have some fun teasing Johnny before he gets the prize he has been lusting for. I recommend that you give it a try.

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