COMMENTARY:
This is a wild ride. It reads like something out of a
Twilight Zone episode. The only characters that you really get to
know are the narrator, who remains nameless, and the blackmailer,
Deborah. The story is very tightly scripted. It pauses long enough
for the narrator to escape his fate, momentarily, but no more than
that.
This story reads like a nightmare I might have had when I was in
high school. That's probably why I found it as gripping as I did.
In more recent years I have learned to enjoy the homosexual
fantasies that my over active imagination conjures up, from time
to time. That's probably why I was aroused by the twists and turns
that the story takes.
I'm not sure if this story was written with an audience in mind or
not. I'm not sure who it would appeal to. I'm fairly sure that
most heterosexual men won't enjoy it. Still, whether you fall into
this classification or not, it isn't too long; give it a try. Who
knows? You might just enjoy it. |