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The other night I went looking for something to read. I couldn't find anything that appealed to me on ASS or ASSM. I surfed over to the ASSM Archive. I looked through a couple months worth of stories from 1997. I found something that I missed when it was originally posted more that three years ago, and which I don't believe has been reposted since. If you believe the author, it is the true account of a 30-year-old, married woman's wild adventures. There is a good deal of exhibitionism and group sex in the story. I should really say gang-bangs, not group sex, because it is usually just her and a bunch of guys. I have only read the first five segments, but have found it entertaining enough to want to continue reading it. | |||||||||||||||||||
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I read a few more segments of Bobbi Sue's Adventure. There is a much higher incidence of gang-banging in segments six through nine than there is in the previous five segments. I'm not wild about gang-bang stories. I usually avoid them but I'm having a hard time putting this one down. Why? Two reasons. One: Bobbi Sue. She seems realistic, primarily because she isn't of just one mind. She loves being wildly promiscuous, but she also fears that she is taking things too far. This seems very realistic to me. She knows that she isn't being very responsible, but she can't deny herself the thrill of fucking strange men. Additionally, Bobbi Sue is not a victim of circumstances. She is the one pushing the envelope quite often, not the men in the story. She is the one making the suggestions as to how she can get even wilder. She propositions the men, and not the other way around. Two: The structure of the story. I get the impression that it was written one segment at a time. The author chronicled Bobbi Sue's frolics without knowing how the story was going to end or even at times without knowing what was going to happen in the next segment. Usually I can figure out where a story is going. This one has kept me guessing, but it is more than just the unpredictability that intrigues me. It is the fact that this story reads like a well written first draft. It is a live performance, not a movie, in my opinion. If there were more stories like this one out there then I might not be as drawn in by this aspect of it, but there aren't. | |||||||||||||||||||
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I just reread what I have written and I really have to wonder if I haven't gone around the bend. So far this story has managed to suck me in, but after reading this review I think that there must be something in the water where I live. Why? Because I usually wouldn't touch a story like this with a ten-foot-pole. This is so frustrating! Aaaahh! I read the next three segments last night before going to bed and enjoyed them almost as much as I did the first nine. I even scanned them before reading them. I knew what was going to happen, more or less, and I still was entranced by what I read. Do I sound like a shill? I feel like one when I write like this. That's right! This collector's edition will only be available for a limited time! Don't miss out on this terrific offer! Call now! I can't think of anything else to say about this story, at the moment. Give it a try. Who knows? You might like it. | |||||||||||||||||||
LINK(S) Bobbi Sue's Adventure Part 01 - BS goes running and meets a mountain biker. |
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