Rogue Review No. 489 - January 8, 2000

 

 

TITLE:

Mystery Caller

AUTHOR:

The Redoubt

LENGTH:

3,300 words

MAIN CHARACTER:

Male

COMBINATION(S):

Twosome (Female, Male)

ORIENTATION(S):

Heterosexual (Female, Male)

RELATIONSHIP(S):

Mother-Son

KINK(S):

Phone Sex

SETTING(S):

Home
Work

GENRE(S):

--

CAUTION(S):

--

 

SUMMARY: Soon after he buys an answering machine, Steve start receiving sexually explicit messages from an unknown woman. The list of suspects includes Cheryl, his mother.

COMMENTARY: Now this is good, very good; no, wait, I think its excellent. There isn't a hell of a lot to it, but I like it a lot. What impresses me the most is how the author twists the story toward the end. I don't want to say anymore for fear of giving something away. I will say that what he does do turned, in my opinion, a very good story into an excellent one.

On the whole I found this story to be extremely arousing and very entertaining. Keep in mind that I usually enjoy stories of consensual incest. This may have biased me toward this story some, but at the same time I think that author has done a better than average job. If you don't care for stories of consensual incest then maybe you should skip this one, otherwise I highly recommend you read it.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 9.5 (out of 10)

  • Arousal: 5/5
  • Editing: 5/5
  • Plot and Characters: 4/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Excellent

 

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