SUMMARY: Susie is working in the local library, the summer before her senior year of high school. One day she accidentally exposes herself to Chad, a guy whom she has the hots for. She manages to get over her initial shame. When the opportunity presents itself she gets to know him a little better. In time, her accidental exhibitionism leads to intentional exhibitionism, by both of them.

COMMENTARY: I am a sucker for well written dialogue. I can appreciate well written narration, but almost always prefer dialogue over narration. The author of this story does a nice job with both. Susie isn't omniscient. Chad is able to hold up his end of an intelligent conversation. Even without exposing their bodies, Susie and Chad manage to heat this story up very quickly.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 10.0 (out of 10)

• Arousal: 5/5
• Editing: 5/5
• Plot and Characters: 5/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Outstanding